Friend

Friend

A Poem by ayosonolowo
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This was writting when i depart from a very real friend.

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Thinking of the times we spent, together,

makes me feel bad seperating from other,

a friend that care,
a friend so dare,

you've been my sleet of joy,
though i take you for a toy,

how would i unravel,
the feelings full of ravel,

you've been my sleeve,
and a night time slave,

i look so wan,
fallen to wane,

i have no other way,
than to let you flow away,

oh dare friend i will always think of you,
even though you left me in a throe,

© 2013 ayosonolowo


Author's Note

ayosonolowo
Thank alot

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THis has such a strange, melencholoy charm...I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, for liking my poem
Losing a friend is a sad story...but one should move on. A true friend will never leave you...remember that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

10 Years Ago

Thanks alot, i really appreciate the review
Loved the rhyming. Good one ayo

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

10 Years Ago

Thanks alot ma
It is very sad to lose a friend and I think you did well to write this.
There were a few spelling errors here and there but keep writing, and I'm sure it will become easier and easier.

I enjoyed it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

10 Years Ago

Thank alot lola
your rhyming is simple yet love the idea that it made sense. Friendship is an amazing experience
nicely written :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

10 Years Ago

I really appreciate your dropping by to grace my writting, thanks alot.
Annie S

10 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
Beautifully written, my dear friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

10 Years Ago

You're welcome
Akashi

10 Years Ago

:D :D :D :D Thank you :D :D
It is disheartning when two good friends seperate for any reason for that causes some hurt and pain between the two whether they acknowledge it or not....A splendid poem...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

10 Years Ago

Thank you alot
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on August 18, 2013
Last Updated on August 19, 2013

Author

ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

Kano, Christainity, Nigeria



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My names are David Ayo Olowoeyo, a local Nigerian young writer born in Kano but originated From kogi state, and writings has been a path of me since when i was at 0 level, though i stay local and have.. more..

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