Scale of Justice

Scale of Justice

A Poem by Kaitlyn
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Pretty self explanatory, with the title. Like a judgment of fate

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You get to have all the fun

Until you are the guilty one

Devoted to speaking only the truth

A promise you'd made in your youth

For the judgment you will wait

To discover your decided fate

What it is, no one may know

'Tis something only the scale will show

The scale of justice as well as fate

Knows your whole life, no debate

You shall get what you deserve and more

Your punishment to settle the score

© 2009 Kaitlyn


Author's Note

Kaitlyn
Rhyming is sheesy, or at leat I think it is, but my poetry doesn't seem the same without it. So it's here to stay.

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This is interesting. I, personally, love the rhyming. There's a certain power behind the words that makes this piece stand strong. Nice work!

-Howl

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this.
It was pretty neat.
I know what you mean about the whole rhyming thing.
There are very few poems where I don't rhyme.
I thought this was excellent.
"You shall get what you deserve and more
Your punishment to settle the score"
That was very strong.
Great work!
-Elissa :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this. I think the rhyming is very good. And you protray your message very well.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Kaitlyn
Kaitlyn

Winfield, MO



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