Two Gods

Two Gods

A Poem by B-law
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The reality of two Gods are expressed in this short poem.

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There are two Gods in this world. 
The one we believe in, and the one we see in the mirror. 
Although there is one that can never be both, there is one that is.

© 2016 B-law



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Author's Note

B-law
I don't do this often, but I felt like I had to after the inspiration I received from this music I just heard. Open to any and all kinds of feedback. Thank you, and enjoy! I truly appreciate your time you spent reading this, and giving me your feedback.

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God sure has many forms for everyone, but seeing him in his own form is something amazing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Crazy inspired, and a succinct display of deep thought... Well said...

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love how this is comparing two types of Gods in this world. The poem is short and wonderful! Writers, in a way, are gods who create many worlds in their minds. Writers are magic.

Posted 2 Years Ago


in his own image. Beautiful poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very deep and thoughtful. I'm curious about the song now that inspired your thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


B-law

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your feedback. By the way, it was Moby - God Moving Over The Face of Waters
Matching Socks

2 Years Ago

Oh cool, thanks for responding!
B-law

2 Years Ago

No problem, I hope you enjoy the song.
I like the last line of this- thoughtful but playful too.
Truth, a smile, and interesting all at the same time.

Posted 2 Years Ago


B-law

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading this I appreciate it.
I don't write poems, so it is difficult for me to criticize someone's phrasing and words but this one, even though it is short and to the point (and perhaps because of it), you can appreciate the meaning without having to read it a couple of times to comprehend what the author wants to express.

Posted 2 Years Ago


B-law

2 Years Ago

It's fine. I enjoyed your review.
Clever word usage. Simple and rather damning (although I tend to read poems with a dark lens, apparently).

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shannon

2 Years Ago

I know it likely wasn't meant to be dark, but apparently the the part of me that reads things with .. read more
B-law

2 Years Ago

I see what you mean aha
s.ms

1 Year Ago

It's quite interesting, it leaves you to think.

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Added on April 19, 2016
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B-law
B-law

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