To The Moon And Back

A cliché I know, but this is about a girl

I want to take you to the moon

And love you in the light

Where time is non existent

And we could kiss all night

 

You engulf my heart with your melodic laugh

Your eyes are like a loving trap

 

You’re the movie I don’t want to end

And the song I want to sing

I see you when I’m dreaming

I see you when I blink

 

                                      I long to hold you in a sweet embrace

                                      My heart is bursting and it’s your to take

Author's Note

This is my first poem, any advice and feedback would be warmly received.

Reviews

[DevKass92]

A very sweet love poem. You certainly make the reader feel the love you have for this girl.

[Benjamin Valentine]

Thank you!

[ink]

Aww. This is wonderful. I suddenly want to feel loved.
You relayed your feelings well.

I loved this so much.

-ink

P.S. I also can't help thinking about Khaleesi in Game of thrones.

[Benjamin Valentine]

Thank you Ink!

[Valentine]

I really like the first grouping. Welcome to the Café. Valentine

[Benjamin Valentine]

Thank you!

[ohemaawrites]

I think this poem is very lovely. You can definitely feel the emotions. Good job!

[Benjamin Valentine]

Glad you like it, thank you!

[Kate Hammond]

You know a poem is good when it makes you feel something, and yours certainly did. Well done!

[Benjamin Valentine]

I appreciate the review, thank you!

[Clau Medeiros]

I love it so much, it made me think of someone, specially the second and third verses.

[Benjamin Valentine]

Thank you!

[Grey]

This is a beautiful, wonderful poem. I absolutely love it. Such a joy to read!

[Benjamin Valentine]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

[ohemaawrites]

I simply love it. Good job.

[Benjamin Valentine]

Thank you!

[carebear8741]

'Where were you all my life?' LOL I love this poem! It is what every woman wants to hear a man whisper to her in the dark. Women want to be shown they are cared for & I'm sure whoever you are writing regarding is very cared for :) Sweet. 100%

[Benjamin Valentine]

Thank you!