When

When

A Poem by BHZolo
"

About the love of my life

"
I am drawn to you 
as a sweet aroma wakes in your presence 
with sweeping golden hair 
and a face that stuns the stars 
you slowly shed a tear 
i will begin my journey for your heart 
alone in the wilderness 
the moon is black 
on a love still lost in mystery

© 2010 BHZolo


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Nicely woven with mysterious wonderment.
Sweet! Thank you for your entry into my
Poetry of Love contest! Good Luck!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful, the last line is phenomenal, 'on a love still lost in mystery' :]

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on January 23, 2010
Last Updated on February 10, 2010
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