Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday

A Poem by Pen The Willows
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My birthday poem (another poem about her!) for my ex-best friend, Isabelle. The deadly sin of wrath.

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I hope you’ll have
A happy birthday
Filled with present galore
I hope you’ll feel
No regret
And certainly
No remorse
 
You’ll be thirteen
A full-fledged teen
You’ll change a lot
But one thing that’ll
Never change
Is that you’re mean and an inkblot (on my life)
 
 
Three years I’ve known you
For the last two
We were declared BFFs
But I guess you love the spotlight
Too much
To show me the steps
 
I’m sorry
I regret my actions
I apologize
But you
Should too
 
I shouldn’t have done it
It was stupid
But we will never be BFFs
Again
Then again, we never were
 
So have a
Nice life
Without me
If you want
Or we can make-up
But our friendship
Will never be the same

© 2009 Pen The Willows


Author's Note

Pen The Willows
Another poem about her.

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gosh, this is really good, alice :)
it hit me hard, though. i went through something exactly like this before a few months ago. my best friend of 4 years like, suddenly dropped me for these other girls because i dressed/looked like an 'emo' kid. and now im a slight outcast, but i have much better friends and im much happier :) so, hopefully things will work out for you too :)
as for the poem, it was great! the flow was wonderful and the stanzas were great. keep it upp :)

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gosh, this is really good, alice :)
it hit me hard, though. i went through something exactly like this before a few months ago. my best friend of 4 years like, suddenly dropped me for these other girls because i dressed/looked like an 'emo' kid. and now im a slight outcast, but i have much better friends and im much happier :) so, hopefully things will work out for you too :)
as for the poem, it was great! the flow was wonderful and the stanzas were great. keep it upp :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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