What Would Happen?

What Would Happen,

If I Died

By My Own Hand,

Who Would Care?

 

Would My Parents,

My Mother

My Father,

Would They Miss Me?

 

Would My Brothers,

The Soccer Player

The One Far Away,

Would They Cry For Me?

 

Would My Friends,

From Long Ago

From Right Now,

Would They Attend My Funeral?

 

Would Those People,

My Enemies

My Frenemies,

Would They Actually Notice?

 

What Would The Students,

At My School

At Schools I Once Attended,

What Would They Say?

 

What Would Happen,

If I Died

By My Own Hand,

Who Would Care?

Reviews

[Esmeralda Enten]

Wow, this was so real. Like, I think everybody in life once thought these things about themselves and you kind of put it out there... kinda reminds me of a poem I'm gonna publish on here. I wrote it a little bit ago, when I first got depressed, but it's not as good as this.

[A.Lee]

I can tell you put feeling into this one. I think a lot of people wonder the same thing. I know I have. More than once actually. I liked the way you formatted it and the way you simply asked questions without assuming the answers.

[Nathan Durham]

That was deep. I have wondered the same thoughts myself, far too many times. There was a good style used to write this poem. I liked the questioning nature of it.