Together Now Alone

A tale of broken love

Flutter

Beat

Pounding in fear

Excitement

Breathtaking

Moment is near

Waiting

Wishing

Kiss me soft

Thrilling

Passionate

Thoughts are aloft

Skipping

Laughing

Life stops still

Hearing

Talking

Stay if you will

Breaking

Crying

Shatter this dream

Moving

Leaving

A lie to seem

Reviews

[Robert]

Lovely Piece Zoey. I like the structure and the stanzas. Presented well and it almost read like a beat of a drum.

[Zoey Ree]

Thank you Robert! :)

[Ronnie]

Great poem as usual. like the way you structure your poem. and the story behind it is BIG!! I read it 4 times because it's so nice to be read specially in loud voice. great job.

[Zoey Ree]

Thank you so much Ronnie! :)

[Misery]

The beginning and the ending, love found and lost on a single page.
A nice expression of love's beauty and the absolute helplessness at love's loss, dear poet.

[Zoey Ree]

Your review made my day Misery! Thank you!

[Misery]

You are welcome, dear Zoey Ree.