Chapter 1 "the way you eat my p***y"

adult content. this is chapter one and will be continued in other chapters. enjoy ;)

i stop to catch my breath, beneath the 

sheets and heavy blanket I tossed over my head 

 

before thrusting my tongue between your legs.

your body shivers;

i can feel your legs quivering in my hands

tremors and a cold sweat;

evidence of the earthquake force orgasm that you experienced

only moments before.

only then

only now 

would i dare stop to catch my breath and replay 

that beautifully erotic scene of sweet 

perversion in my head

pause

your p***y was already wet by the time my lips had made the journey from

your mouth

..down

to your collar bone

..down 

..down..

I pause to breathe in the

smooth, sweet skin of your breasts, my breath

trickles out of slightly parted lips to

tickle your nips;

they rise and fall as your beating heart quickens its' pace

and you bring your hands to my head to push my open mouth

down onto your warm, hard mounds

but i object 

and I force your hands back above your head

not yet, babygirl.

not yet.

i blow gently on those beautiful tips again;

it's a small and gentle move for me

but the gentle breeze that blows forth from my mouth

has hurricane force effects on you

i look up at you, your eyes shine with the unspeakable plea;

"please. let me feel those lips on me"

I finally give in and gently wrap my warm mouth completely around 

the swollen, throbbing peaks that rise to greet me;

sucking in. 

biting down,

but only, slightly.

tracing the tip with my tongue

your nips; round, silky smooth

like pearls.

perfect

it began as a gentle provocation;

laying beside one another, eyes locked and bodies pulled in close 
so close

so

close

I could see your lips part slightly 

your chest begin to rise and fall in anticipation of what we both knew 

would come

soon

but

not.

just.

yet.

you see, i do not know you well; we met once before a week

ago and felt a rush of desire, natural in its' essence as if 

the universe was awaiting the connection

between the two of us and all that was left

was for us to finally meet.

so you called me tonight

2am

I would love to see you tonight, if you're not busy

perhaps I could come spend the night at your place

this was a suggestion you knew I would not refuse

and here we are.

your p***y was already wet by the time my tongue had traveled

its' way down to trace the plush, pink, throbbing folds of those lips

the sweet smell of soaked sheets beneath them 

speaking to me the same way your eyes did before,

begging me to quench my thirst and in the process

quenching yours as well

 

you thrust your open fingers through my hair 

pushing my head down deeper into you

forcing your dew-laden petals aside, so wet with desire, my face glistens from the contact and your

warmth trickles down my chin 

i take my fingers to gently catch the flow, look up at you and 

bring my wet fingers to my mouth, tasting you

savoring you

you let out a soft moan, and force my head

back down. you grind on my lips as my tongue flicks that sweet spot that is

your c**t, you let out a cry that 

gives away your pleasant surprise;

he knows what he is doing

you grind harder into my face

faster, harder

faster.

harder.

you're getting close 

and then it happens

i open my mouth as a tsunami flow meets my already soaked lips. i worship the taste as you give me the sweet nectar of your orgasm. you fumble 

for words, when finally between heavy sighs and deep inhales you muster the composure to exhale the words

oh, the way you eat my p***y

i look up at you, a mischievous grin dancing upon my lips

"can i have another taste?"

before you can respond, i begin to run my tongue softly and

slowly in circles on your c**t

again. 

you let out a low and long "fuuuuuuuck" 

look down at me and moan out a broken record 

of sweet repetition. again. again.

and again

"oh, the way you eat my p***y"

sweet, savory music to my ears.

 

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

This is so great! I love how you gave us a tease to begin, but then filled us in on the details to really give us the full picture. Exciting newness in the dance of anticipation, the unknown desires the 2am call. But that was only the beginning, kept us hanging in suspense before pleasing your readers again... and again, breathlessly

[J. B.]

thank you for reading and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! :)

[Lady Tyke]

This content will always win, especially when described so well but what I really love is your pacing. The way you've broken this up feels like a mixture of breaths from both giver and receiver.
Definitely an enjoyable and pleasurable read :p

[Relic]

The orchestration of a tongue can create a masterpiece. Well done.

[KCthelastboyscout]

It's always an amazing thing to discover what you're good at.maybe even more than good.receiving pleasure is nice.but giving pleasure.priceless

[Amber Smith]

Uhhmmm......just wow. Good job. You definitely did what you set out to do. Like Courtney said, great imagery.

[Courtney Hough]

This is sexy! Not to mention great imagery. The build in this is one the reader can easily feel.

[J. B.]

I am glad you enjoyed it and could feel it ;)