str8 flexin

str8 flexin

A Poem by J. B.

selfie culture.
a snap of self reflection
and two more snaps 
of self- re-flexin
evidence of your
self-reflex-to-shun

smile pretty for the camera

© 2017 J. B.



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I agree with Dead Alive Dave, stretch this out and it can turn into something even more awesome. :) I like the message this gives though. Smile for the camera, despite how fake that smile may be. :) Great job, mate. :D

Posted 2 Days Ago


The Purple Witch

2 Days Ago

Ah, I fully understand. :) I do a lot of my works short. Tends to get the message across better.
J. B.

2 Days Ago

thanks for the input and suggestion though :)
The Purple Witch

2 Days Ago

No problem. And thank you for sharing your brilliant mind. :)
The last line is clunky.

Flesh this out more and you may have something.

I bet you wrote this inside 13 minutes.

Posted 5 Days Ago



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J. B.
J. B.

NYC, NY



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