Finest Moment

Questioning the heart

 

Finest Moments

 

 

Life’s finest moments

Stem across time,

for

not just one

will jubilate

the fibers

linking you

with me.

 

For only if,

it was true,

then,

the chase,

around the meadow,

through cornrows of

flowers

would not

attempt to hide

that sparkle

reflecting in

your eyes.

 

For that

joyous thunder

rippling through

your lungs

would not

tickling me

from head to

toe.

 

For that

silky touch,

would not

captivate

my heart

and soul

forever,

in the pond

we wade

to cool

the passion…

 

so it cannot

be true.

 

Reviews

[closed account]

wow!! very nice and elegant! I see from the others that you have change somewhat!! hmmm makes you think of *what or who is the ispiration* keep it up!

[We are young.]

your poems still amaze me.

[Wildfleour]

Ralphy - You are starting to show your "mushy" side...........I see you! :)

[just is]

Wow! This is lovely, I like this makes you grasp for air, wonderful write.