Breaking Free

The magic of understanding time

 

Breaking Free

 

Millions of years ago

I was just a genome of

the universe. That intricate

part specifying my place in time,

birth, death, when, where and how

Who will be my victims?

How many people will I touch?

 

Protecting the code

would always be the priority,

and encryption

of unprecedented level,

so as to continue the cycle

 

Then the magic appears,

what makes us compassionate

hungry for acceptance

togetherness,

a well balance diet of romance,

stimulation and imagination

 

All of this is a part of that map

the puzzlement of time,

the complexity

of breaking free ,

from the repetitious bond

that keeps us locked,

trapped in a world,

deep beneath

the soil of the earth

 

Chiseling away  

at the mortar,

over time, loosens the stones,

releasing the stagnate air…

Unlocked

is a glimmer of light

an alternate new path

a journey for all to travel,

experience the wealth,

passion

hunger

love

prosperity

for millenniums,

instead of years.

What could possibly be next?

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

my clipart is of microsoft word

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

Dear Ralphy,

I first want to say that the text is so appealing, the quality of beauty to match the significance
of the poem- which is so interesting to think of oneself through all millenium to be such a
detrimental being in this universe, and all who one comes across as "victims"- yes, if touched
by an extraordinary soul- the sort of "good pain" that comes when meeting someone who can make such impact on the soul of the self.It is a fantastic notion to realize every soul is a genome of the universe, for millions of years before "becoming", as if "this place" was waiting for each one of us.
I admire the "diet of romance" (I could live on that alone)
and for all of these rarities to live on for milleniums, instead of just years,
as time itself is a puzzle, but ever moving, never stagnant, always changing.
What an illustrious, luminous poem you have written under either the sun or celestial moon.
Thank you for sharing your beauty.

[Emmie]

This one made me think a while. :) You're an amazing writer.

"All of this is a part of that mapthe puzzlement of time, the complexity of breaking free ,from the repetitious bondthat keeps us locked,trapped in a world,deep beneath the soil of the earth"

These were my favorite lines. ;D

[Wildfleour]

looses the stones -- loosens the stones

Cool clipart.

Anyway, this is a poem that makes the reader have to think - about the past, present and what the future will bring.

[just is]

Then the magic appears,
what makes us compassionate
hungry for acceptance
togetherness,a well balance diet of romance,
stimulation and imagination

Love these lines here, I really like this write, i can feel
the emotion you have put into this write. wonderfully written.