Delightful Heaven

 

Delightfully Heaven

 

Gentle is the breeze

that lifts this silky-smooth

fabric with a bouquet of colorful

lilies and roses that drapes

over your soft skin,

as it clings to the beads of sweat

that roll off aimlessly

from your steamy thoughts.

 

 Almost as if a brush,

has taken to the canvas,

gliding the bristles

with tender loving care

across each layer

while building

to a glistening finish. 

 

 

A vapor cloud fogs your vision,

while spinning your mind

into a daze,

increasing the rhythmic beat

that vibes and thumps

your chest,

as you slowly drift

into a land of fantasy,

spilling into an ocean

that cool your sun-baked soul,

anticipating this delightful heaven

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is beautiful...i really like this...i love the imagery.
Great Job :)

[moon manmad]

I think I already read this at that other (better) place, but worth reading again. very strong imagery here, ralphy. youre pretty good at this poetry thing.

[Emmie]

As always, so awesome. Just as the person who wrote it. Man, the imagery struck me blind in this one! Blue, blue, blue... a wonderful color... and wonderful in this poem. I love it, and it fits my foggy mood today :) Wonderful job

[Just Plain Me]

I really like this :)