What you see, I feel

What you see, I feel

A Poem by Ralphy

 

What you see I feel
 
 
Compassion of the eyes
tells one that love resides
in the walls
of the many chambers
that beat along with the heart,
although pumping through the veins
is not the  blood,
it is the liquid that follows
the aspiration of each drop
of thought that has tightly bonded
to the mind. 
 
A glorious memory
that shares warmth
and harmony
to adjure with the soul,
to show the light of a kiss,
it flows through the nerves
that vibrate the dust,
breaking free the formula
that makes love,
a love,
any love,
blossom in the wink
of an eye.

© 2009 Ralphy


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You're the only person I know that can write beautiful romance pieces like this one. It takes me to a whole new world when I read your romance pieces. You are a very skilled guy, and it shows through your writing. Romance is a favorite genre for many, but none of them compare to yours. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"breaking free the formula that makes love, a love, any love, blossome in the wink of an eye." extrabrilliant, my friend.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very romantic piece, love has depths beyond what we know, that is what keep it mysterious and exciting.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Ralphy this is so beuatiful and ever so touching
it just soothes the soul to read. You have a romantic heart

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Ralphy
Ralphy

Belleville, MI



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