For the sake

Some Random Thoughts

Flowers bloom every day.

Day after day, come what may.
Mind looks for science, and purpose.
But they just bloom not to pose nor propose.

As if the purpose of their existence is served.

Clouds and wind roam around.
Making our hearts pound and sound.
Shaking the mighty Sun to dimmer.
Showers of heaven blowing the hot summer.
As if the purpose of their existence is served.

Thoughts spring up dressed in verses.
Moaning for meaning in meaningless stresses.
Soul of the thoughts sewn in the body of poem.

A work of emotion can send a beam not a theme.
As if the purpose of their existence is served.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Thoughts dressed in poetry....what a wonderful concept! Flowers do bloom no matter what happens around them.....they know their place in life and they know they must bloom....just as the poet knows he/she must write. I liked this one a lot, Bala. Lydi**

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you very much for the appreciation Lydia. This write us close to my heart. There may not be literary beauty in it, but I tried to pass on message that the existence and especially the flowers give us every day.. Thanks again for visiting.

[Michael S]

A very refreshing and original poem. I absolutely loved the way you described the existence of flowers, clouds, wind and thoughts.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you very much Michael S, for visiting and appreciating this write. This is one of my favorites..

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Thoughts dressed in verse, I can relate. This makes the point with artistic flair and subtil leading.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for visiting and appreciating..

[wander girl]

Such a deep thought is expected from your side...
Really good piece of work.It puts me in thought...

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for reading my favorite one and appreciating it. Keep visiting.

[Jade]

this is really good i enjoyed reading this

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked how you used the words. Make them come alive and strong.
"Thoughts spring up dressed in verses.
Moaning for meaning in meaningless stresses."
I liked the above lines. Create thoughts and visions. Thank you Bala for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bala Gorthi]

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Bear]

Bravo! What, why, when, where, all the silly things people question when asking what is the meaning of life trying to make it more difficult than it needs to be. They should just read this poem and absorb the grandness of just being. Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Bala Gorthi]

That was exactly what I was trying to say. Thanks for reading and reviewing .
Your words mean a lot to me.
Keep commenting.:-):-)

[ManasaC]

This is really amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Beautiful!!!

[Bala Gorthi]

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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This brings to mind the subject of nature vs science.....science seeks to find the truth and answers in everything, whereas things in nature just exist as they are meant to exist, serving their purpose, free of any constraints, yet perfectly satisfied within their limitations.

You are progressing quite well so far in your writing; i can see you starting to create various images in your verse, a very good technique to improve writing quality. Keep at it. Practice makes perfect. And we all have our strengths when it comes to putting ink and quill on the page.

Keep them coming. This was nice work.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for reviewing my work.
I know, a have a long way to go. Poems are the shortest and best way to present anything. But presenting and justifying feelings whether with words or rhyme and rhythm is a challenge for me as I have not read a much of poetry.
Your valued reviews and comments are definitely going to brighten my path and lead me in this direction. I always look forward to your kind and encouraging words.
Thank you for reading. Keep reading and guiding me.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Ah! the very existence of things around us.. why ? and how ? and what purpose they hold ?
All these are very natural questions that an inquisitive mind poses and very rightly expressed in your poem. As you say - "As if the purpose of their existence is served". We may not understand everything and we may not learn the purpose of their existence but we do know they exist for a reason and that is what they are serving. Even some random thoughts make music and lend meaning when their purpose is served :) Very neatly done and enjoyed reading it.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thanks for reading my piece.
For me, the existence is 'the love immense 'of this universe for the universe. I feel one can never adequately thank for what one gets from the universe. In that helplessness, it was my anguish which said ,even if we do not thank, it doesn't matter,
It gives immense satisfaction when one's work is appropriately received and understood.
Thanks again for your wonderful review !! :-)