The Birth

The Birth

A Poem by Bala Gorthi

I swirl and move slow
I grow in you to bring a glow
I unfold to be awake
The walls shake
I push the walls with my loud bangs
You my creator, go through many pangs
I push my head and my being out
Celebrate, I am born.


As a thought of heart
I rise to give you a thwart
I invade your world of dream
Forming the soul of a theme
I shake you with my bubbly storm
You give me a name and form
Here I come,
I am The Poem.


To change the world here I come
Greet me dears with a warm welcome
Someone rises there at the dawn
It's me with a brain and brawn.

© 2016 Bala Gorthi



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Yes, each poem we write is a creation from our soul....from the very depths of us. The words disturb our sleep as a newborn baby would. The ideas smack us in the face...ungrateful as they are! :) Wonderful metaphor here. I enjoyed the write. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

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Dear, Bala How to write a review on this piece, I really do not have a word. Despite it I would like to say that you worded a very beautiful thought of making changes in the society by composing poems. We all know a child was borne to do something to make changes in this words. You portrayed this notion in the poem very well. I love your metaphors. Thanks for sharing such lovely piece. Keep writing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

11 Months Ago

It gives immense satisfaction when our work rightly interpreted and received. I am glad you read bet.. read more
This is an extremely meaningful one on creation of poem. I like the analogy you have given in it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

11 Months Ago

Thank you Michael, for visiting and leaving your precious words. I am glad you liked the write..
Such moving glimpses of a life awakening. It makes me realize the creative force of words to arouse a world around us.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

11 Months Ago

Thank you for visiting and leaving your your words....
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Gee
It is strange how we spawn poems and even stranger the content therein. Sometimes leaves me thinking my brain should be put to better use, or even SOME use. I enjoyed your writing

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

12 Months Ago

Thank you for visiting and enjoying this write.. Keep visiting and sharing your views....
Every time a poem or a creative piece sees the light of the day, the feeling is overwhelming and comparing it with birth is brilliant. A mother is reborn with her child and so is poet with his/her poem. It is a part of us, so near and special. A very beautiful masterpiece. Great job!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you Manasa, for appreciation!
You are right in saying that a mother is reborn with her.. read more
Wow, very beautiful piece! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ng Hai Dang, for visiting and appreciating...
I really enjoyed reading this work...very Well written..thank you for the beauty that you so adeptly
Put in prose...Debbie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and appreciating. Welcome to writerscafe..
True, so true.... poets pour their heart, their emotions, their soul in creating the poems. Its a part of the poet written in words.
Thanks for sharing. Really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you Nwang for enjoying this write..Yes,the process is the same for all of us.
Beautiful and fascinating. Our works of art are indeed like our children. I enjoyed this piece and loved how it expanded my mind. Great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you for visiting enjoying this write..keep visiting.
Clap!clap!clap!the true poetry to express a poet and its poetry
diligent and smart work from your side.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

I am humbled by your words. Thank you for the review..keep visiting.

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