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The cake

The cake

A Poem by Bala Gorthi

In the wait of thee, my poem is thy cake
Descend the heavens and enjoy the bake
Stuffed with my love see my soul inscribed
Thee take a nip make our bond redeemed


Happy Birth Day Jesus !

© 2016 Bala Gorthi



Author's Note

Bala Gorthi
Just a shortie, written on Christmas ....

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I always love seeing you here, since your visits are few these days. You are such an enjoyable writer & thinker, I always hope to see you back here writing & posting more of your stuff again. But if not, we’ll understand & simply savor the memory of our interactions (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


What a darling little write this is! Honest and endearing, one for the Lord! Nice work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

3 Months Ago

Thank you visiting and appreciting this piece. Sorry for responding this late.
well i am sure . Jesus will be happy heard that such nice prayer. well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you for visiting and appreciating.
These poem has devotion as well as emotion.
This is a beautiful four liner I have ever read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you Michael for the visit and these very uplifting words.. Apart from my heart, words are the .. read more
Such a romantic tidbit...the sort of poem one frames and gives as a gift. Sweet! Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you for such a lovely review, Lydia!
The joy of the day and of your sweet thoughts mingled with your heart's dear praise make this a perfect wish for the day. Thank you so much for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Froman for your visit and kind review.. Keep visiting...
An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Only more in the new year, dear poet. :)
Hahaha. A smart idea!

I guess that amidst all the festivities the true meaning of Christmas is sometimes lost. A very nice dedication. I just wonder......what was the flavour of this cake? ;)
Nicely written, and Merry Christmas to you!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Ha ha ! It's his favorite flavor.. A secret ... Only three people Mother Mary, he and I, know it.read more
Belated Merry christmas, Bala :-)
An ode to jesus !
Very sweet way of expressing your love and devotion towards jesus !
I hope jesus cherished your cake.



Posted 1 Year Ago


Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

I hope so..
Thank you Gorthi for visiting and for your sweet words! Merry Christmas!

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Added on December 26, 2016
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