I love you, You loved me

I love you, and you loved me

That has been the most important thing

of my interwoven existence.

 

You are the root of my life

A star that defines my legacy

Like a tender veil

you cover me with hope

 

I am caught in a stumbled world

That knows nothing about reality

I love you, but I am alone

I don't have a place to dream

or a friend to smile for

You don't love me?

Who are you then?

You made me realise my beauty

and then took it with you
What purpose you had in my life?

 

Love walks alone

with rocks that cut my tender feet

The vacant horizon never arrives

If eternity is still alive

If there is still a bit of indivisibility left in us

Then let me make you immortal with my verses, again

I love you, and you loved me

God I see no purpose in filling sheets

Tear off my mortality then

And free my purity from my human heart.

Reviews

[luviva]

well, Its been a while since i passed by but i am back!
this is a great write that tell of all the woes of a Lost love.
every reader can relate.
nice write.
Joan

[Mr.Cardigan]

Gosh this is really beautiful

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you :)

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

Such beauty & beautifully crafted.

[Clive D Costa]

Nice! u reminded me of myself in some ways.. its gutwrenching...

[R. L. Hill]

This is inspirational to me. I love it. Thank you for penning

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

From your human heart, an inspiring and gleeful piece.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Truly beautiful.Lost love is a true heart break ,well penned:)

[Ahena MK]

beautiful poem... enjoyed reading keep crafting