WORTHLESS LIFE

UNREQUITMENT is the greatest curse..

My mood is manipulated
My mood gets change
All my feelings depend on you
But you never think in this range....

Irritation touches my heart
Pity is considered 'A Lie'
After making each one laugh
I just go back and cry...

Nothing seem worthwhile
Everything needed a leap
All my emotions are eaten up by worms
The only thing I love is to weep....

Wept and wept not to forget you
But to reduce my intense pain
All I get is a dominating memory of yours
Thus I'm left a man in chains...

Though many differences stood
Between me and you like a wall
Yet I can give up everything for you
If you promise to be there when I fall...

Written By - Basu Gupta

Author's Note

Love can sometimes be unconditional but it often aches when someone fails to reciprocate it..

Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

legasp

First things first the picture... it seems like its a character from Pacthesis' Wonderland Days

You play that as well? XD

Anyway now that that's out. Hmm... I can't really comment on this but it's a nice read. You seem really heartbroken D: I'm worried D:

[Basu Gupta]

no no.i'm fine....don't you worry...
it's all good now...btw thanks and i really appreciate your caring attitude towards me.....

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

good :) I can't help it DX

[Phoenix]

Keep writing

[Basu Gupta]

yes....thanq

[Veronica Chandler]

A clear view of the "Dark Side" of the elusive thing called "Love." I suppose without the pain the "Love" we seek would have no real depth. For without the comparison of feelings considered dark, the love when it comes, might seem more like a monotone trance. Very well written Basu, and you must continue putting pen to page for it seem a calling for you.

[Basu Gupta]

thanq ma'am....

[Veronica Chandler]

You are welcome

[larryb]

Love is what we all look for in life and when you receive it unconditionally its the greatest feeling you can have...nice job with this dark write Basu..

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lot..

[Blue Belle]

Deep, dark poem. Nice.

[Basu Gupta]

thanks

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah, love given unconditionally is real love (:

THis is well penned and it expressed all the feelings that you want us-the readers to understand~!

Good job

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lottt Rhianne...

[Baby Ricochet]

Your dog loves you unconditionally people don't. Nice rhyme. I liked the All my emotions are eaten up by worms part best

[Basu Gupta]

thanks

[Rachel Anderson]

The third stanza is my favorite. The last two lines are powerful as well. Great job.

[Basu Gupta]

thanks Rachel..

[InsanityWriter]

Very sad, but also full of beauty and power. Excellent poem. :)

[Basu Gupta]

glad u liked it...thanks

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

interesting...some of the wordings were confusing but it was a really lovely thing to read!

[Basu Gupta]

thank you