A SHAFT OF LIGHT IN MY DARKENED LIFE

A SHAFT OF LIGHT IN MY DARKENED LIFE

A Poem by Basu Gupta
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few things can't be written..coz, my vocab is just inadequate to describe it fully...or maybe i don't want to write because it will restrict her beauty..

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Gorgeous was that face
Of which I had a sight
Darkened was my life earlier
But it appeared a shaft of light....

Her gestures were fascinating
which illumined my confused mind
struggled for an appropriate word to descibe her
hours were passed to find....

Always wished her to be in my worthier arms
And i'll never let her go,
fill and embrace her tightly
just like a mountain entrapped by snow...

This world of mine appeared small
when she stood beside me
nothing feared at all
like everyone's kneeling on their respective knees...

Always hoped to describe her as 'best'
but my writings seem endless
Precious is her moments for me
more than a diamond she's priceless.....

Written by Basu Gupta

© 2013 Basu Gupta


Author's Note

Basu Gupta
LOVE' ,though an abbreviation yet carries the whole meaning..everyone feels it,encounters it at some stage of his life..though characterised under a single and a common word 'LOVE' yet is different and unique for everyone..

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i loved the imagery and emotion in this piece, beautifully written fantastic job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very well done. :) I liked it. ^_^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really well written! Love really can make you a better and happier person. Good job, keep writing! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

10 Years Ago

thanq.....
It is a good write and love the theme. Excellent structure. But some lines need to spin up in syntax. Overall it is an honest brilliant work..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

11 Years Ago

thanks a lot Marc....
Very nicely written Basu; Some of the best poets in the world have tried to capture this thing called "Love" in poetic verse and I doubt if one of them feels they have ever really quite captured the essence of it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

11 Years Ago

thanks a lotttttt ma'am.......it really meant a lot..
Keep writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

11 Years Ago

yes......thanq
Aww it's really entertaining, reading all your poems of love like this. It's so... I don't know it awakens the girly side of me that wants me to squeal like crazy.

This is a nice write. I don't have much to say other than that but good luck with this lucky lady of yours :D

Nice write~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

11 Years Ago

thanks a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.....this review of your's really made me happy....
Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

aww glad to help make a smile once in a while
Basu Gupta

10 Years Ago

ya sure...
You're really love sick, dude. Good for the girl for having someone like you (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

11 Years Ago

thanxx a lot...
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

You're welcome
This one's kind of all over the place. It needs to be tightened up on the flow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

11 Years Ago

I'll surely add this to my account...
Thank You..
what a lovely piece of writing :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

11 Years Ago

thanxx

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Basu Gupta
Basu Gupta

Agra, Agra, India



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Freelance Music Composer, Lyricist, Guitarist, Pianist, Interior Decorator, Tarot Card Reader. I sincerely don't want to mention the things above but been working and earning through the same force.. more..

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