TRAIL OF LIES

TRAIL OF LIES

A Poem by Basu Gupta


I was in the dark n shouting loud
when I hear your voice in a casual crowd
with a tongue of black
which truth just lack
with the floor just shook n' followed a crack..

I just tried to make my foot on way
All I need's some strength I dare to say
to bear such a dreadful night
to quench my thirst with a "SHINING DAY"

Shining day
yes I dare to say
I want a shining day
Can't I live my way..


I then watched you in the narrow street
With your head on his lap on a brownish seat
I just fell from the highest height
With anger being poured down through eyes..

Then I smashed my pitiable unrequited face
Coz, I didn't do wrong in our SHARED  case

Now I just hate of being an optimistic fool
who crushed his dreams for a lady so cruel
Though she stole my heart with her glaring eyes
Still i don't want a trail of lies

I can live my life as a lonely one
With days like nights in-spite of sun
A body devoid of heart n' soul
But i can surely learn to crawl...

yes i can learn to crawl
yes i can learn to crawl

Yes i'll crawl
even i'll fall
With betrayed soul
still i'll crawl..

Yes i'll crawl
even i'll fall
With betrayed soul
still i'll crawl..

© 2014 Basu Gupta



Author's Note

Basu Gupta
my first song..
hope you all like it

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Enojyed reading this. Liked your line breaks. Also your rhyming wasn't forced upon which allowed the poem to flow nicely. From your choice of words I could tell that the speaker has quite a strong personality. Glad you shared this...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thank You for reading
I liked the choice of words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thank You for reading.
superb
good
really like it
you are very talented





Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thank you..
good ,well done, nice job, keep it up....i wanna know why your poetry declare love of mortal being???? think about immortal love of god....

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Gonna think..I'll come up with something of that sort now..
thanks for visiting
I was just going to say as I read this that it is very songlike. Lyrical and well crafted. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thank You very much..
Very nice piece and yes I like it. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thanks Patricia
This is a nice lyrical piece. Bravo!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thank You Dhaye
Dhaye

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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Ana
Love the anger of your soul. I've been there myself, though it was many years ago.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Hey thank you..
btw it's just fictitous for me
I've never been in this kinda stuff..but .. read more
The tragedy of love unrequited worsened by betrayal. I have yet to hear the melody to give any final feedback.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Sorry, the video says "Error."
I checked out the other one. Play the acoustic guitar myself.. read more
Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

I didn't get you..PM what?
Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Just did.
nice song... lovely lyrics.. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thank you alge..

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Basu Gupta
Basu Gupta

Agra, Agra, India



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Freelance Music Composer, Lyricist, Guitarist, Pianist, Interior Decorator, Tarot Card Reader. I sincerely don't want to mention the things above but been working and earning through the same force.. more..

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