CAN'T YOU BE MINE

CAN'T YOU BE MINE

A Poem by Basu Gupta
"

English Song..damn special for me.. For "Her"..Whom I'm gonna remember thr most..

"
Title - "Can't You be Mine"

My dreams are of you
Which forced me to do
Thorns are saved for me 
But petals for you..

Can I be your shadow
Always walking beside
Can I be your heartbeat
Of your heart inside..

Cant u be mine..
Mere khwaabo me tu harr pal zinda hai..
Cant u be mine
Har lamha bas tu saansein leta hai..

I cant breathe alone
Coz, my breath is counting on you..
I cant sleep alone
Coz m thinkin about you night till dawn..

But now
I feel
The moments 
are just some memories..

But now 
I can see
You're leaving
Just like a shadow in the dark..

But I'm holding you girl
N I'm holdin you tight
No matter you ain't there 
Still kept close to my heart..

Yes I'll be your shadow
Always walking beside
Yes I'll be your heartbeat
of your heart inside..

Yes you'l be mine..
Mere khwaabo me tu harr pal zinda hai..
Yes you'll be mine
Har lamha bas tu saansein leta hai..
Yes you'l be mine.
Me dekhoon toh bas tera chehra hai..
Yes you'l be mine
Binn tere mera dil adhoora hai..

Thank You for readin..By Basu Gupta

© 2014 Basu Gupta



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i think that you are just wasting your skill... love and verse are written by you for the one who is mortal...
uniquely u have the power of verse to arouse your true love(GOD THE CREATOR)... DIVE INTO ITS RHYTHM AND FEEL AS ONE with him...become like MEERA and experience true bliss and depart to your true abode....BECAUSE WHETHER U ACCEPT OR NOT THIS IS YOUR FLOW AND YOUR JOURNEY AS YOU ARE SOUL...




Posted 1 Year Ago


A very warm write, wish I knew the foreign words. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thank You for reviewing
A beautifully romantic though bittersweet write. I think this would make a good song . ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thank You for your feedback Mam
Miss Sharon

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome! ~Sharon



Can I be your shadow

Always walking beside

Can I be your heartbeat

Of your heart inside.. Very nice thoughts.. True love does this to me... =) Thank you

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thank You..
You really like romance, huh? :) (who doesn't?) Well done, you captured that emotion well. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thanks for visiting..glad you liked it..
Alverrann

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
I loved reading this poem, it has such a good rythmn to it. Very creative with the English hindi combination.

Kaze~

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading..
Blackstar

2 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
Loved, loved, loved!

It's so romantic. I would honestly faint if I received a love letter similar to this.

I'm sort of confused though. You managed to put in another language.

Do you mind translating those lines to me?

You're writing has this great flow, and the stanzas are well put together.

I also loved how you compared yourself to thorns, and compared the girl to petals.

Makes it even sweeter.

Great write Basu. (:

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

 Mer khwaabo me tu harr pal zinda hai..- You are alive in my dreams

Cant u be mine
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It sounds like something that you would give to someone you are madly in love with.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
Good rythmn! I like it. Would make a beautiful song. My favorite lines are: Yes I'll be your shadow / Always walking beside / Yes I'll be your heartbeat / of your heart inside. Very romantic


Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thank You..
nice one..liked the english hindi combination...very new!!...liked it much.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thanks Shubhangi

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Added on June 23, 2014
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Basu Gupta
Basu Gupta

Agra, Agra, India



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