Broken Melody

Broken Melody

A Poem by Amanda
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I poem about a broken heart.

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My porcelain heart fell apart,
I tried to fix it but still
I am missing a few pieces.

I bow my head
as I clinched my chest,
trying to calm my beating heart;
(before it breaks free from my chest).

With each beat
my heart skips a beat,
memories flooded
as my blood pressure rises.

My porcelain heart
begins to blacken,
mold grows
where nothing is left.

Replaced by old memories,
my heart begins to sing.
Like a violin I pluck the stings,
playing a broken melody.

© 2018 Amanda



Author's Note

Amanda
Please don't be rude, I am autistic and I might have a few mistakes. Please give me the right spelling instead of bulling me about it. I do my best just like everyone else. Thank you.

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The poem told a real story. Old heart can be broken and when awoke. Different.
"Replaced by old memories,
my heart begins to sing.
Like a violin I pluck the stings,
playing a broken melody. "
I do like the above lines. I like how you write. With a honest pen. Thank you Amanda for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

3 Months Ago

Thank you for commenting. I am glad you like it. I do my best.
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You do very well Amanda and you are welcome.



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Your lines are clean and honest. I enjoyed reading this. Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much. I hope you have a wonderful day. I am glad you like it.
The poem told a real story. Old heart can be broken and when awoke. Different.
"Replaced by old memories,
my heart begins to sing.
Like a violin I pluck the stings,
playing a broken melody. "
I do like the above lines. I like how you write. With a honest pen. Thank you Amanda for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

3 Months Ago

Thank you for commenting. I am glad you like it. I do my best.
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You do very well Amanda and you are welcome.
Melancholy tones flow and float and echo... here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

3 Months Ago

So true. I am lucky I am smart enough to want to research and understanding others. I think I would .. read more
Chris

3 Months Ago

Appreciating "bluntness" is a skill few ...master - chuckling here. But when you DO the friendship .. read more
Amanda

3 Months Ago

That's true. I have been told by a lot of people they like my honestly. I have more long term friend.. read more

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Added on January 12, 2018
Last Updated on January 12, 2018
Tags: broken heart, love, struggling, relationship issues

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I am a 36 year old woman living with autism and chronic illnesses. I love to write and draw. I have been doing both since an early age. I was diagnosed with autism in my early 30's. I have Autistic Sa.. more..

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