Days Go Bye

Oh butterfly, why did you go?

I miss you so much with your glow

Had so much potential and beauty

Lovely ways of living today

Why did you have to go so soon

I wish that we could live forever

I'm sorry for all the pain you went through

Today might be gloomy but tomorrow is another day

Why can't we stay together

Beautiful and graceful

I'm sorry for not being there

I will always love and care for you

Thank you for everything that happened

Thank you for letting me survive

I'm just sorry that time was too short

Reviews

[M.H. Bones]

Great read! I would suggest making line 8 into two lines somehow. I feel as if it would flow better.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Okay I can do that :) thanks for the review :)

[Perkele.7885]

Is it the cocoon that is talking?

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

You can interpret it that way but it was about a love that had to leave too fast.

[Perkele.7885]

I think that I miss the boat on your poem some how.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

ohh well it means about a love I guess it could of been a cocoon if you think about it but it was intended to be it.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

This was so achingly beautiful. It's sad but it's also accepting. A truly great tone. I especially love the last five lines. They were really great and they spoke to me. Thank you for sharing!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you!