Left Unanswered

Heart beats faster

Tears start rolling

Sadness fills her eyes

Her heart unable to take it anymore

She has dealt

With alot in life

Judged by many

Hated by some

She never predicted

A life like hers

Once in the high life

Now on the low

One thing happened too many times

Without that one thing she would be fine

But everything happens for a reason

Her one "mistake" may have made her into a better person

Realization that people have it worse

She doesn't regret her "mistake"

But she has many questions

Left unanswered

And will always be left unanswered

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem dear Lauren.
"She doesn't regret her "mistake"
But she has many questions
Left unanswered
And will always be left unanswered"
The above lines. I do understand. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lauren.

[The Iron Horseman]

This is good. The sense of loss and the dawning of hope in a bad situation are both readily discernible, with a nice hint of realization of self-worth.
A few hints, if you are open to them:
- 'alot' on line 6 should be 'a lot'
- I believe 'Realization' should be 'Realizing'
- your last line would be better as either ''That will always be left unanswered' or 'And they will always be left unanswered'. Keep on writing!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you very much for the review :)

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome.

[Farhan Shaikh]

True, powerful poem, some questions always be left unanswered..perhaps that's the way it's suppose to be,
Message conveyed really well.
Loved the whole poem

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)