Slow Down Mister Clown!

Slow Down Mister Clown!

A Poem by Baz
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Mister Clown is driving too fast and needs to slow down...

"
slow down, mister clown
you are driving too fast
you went through a light
at the junction just past

you look like you're doing
a hundred and three
slow down mister clown
and just listen to me

you seem in a hurry
you're making a dash
but unless you slow down
you are going to crash

wherever you're going
you can't be that late
whoever you're meeting
I'm sure that they'll wait

so don't go so fast
as you drive through the town
please listen to me and
SLOW DOWN MISTER CLOWN!!!

© 2010 Baz



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I can see this in a childrens book easy. The languge is just right. All it needs is the pictures to go with it. Well done.


Posted 7 Years Ago


You write well dear friend.
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Submissions (poems, short stories, sketches, song lyrics and any other) are most welcome. Read our GUIDELINES at

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Thank you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


An endearing poem. Easy to read and very enjoyable

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is super adorable. :)
Great write.. love the rhyme scheme and tone of it all. :)

-Coral-

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 27, 2010
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Tags: children, poetry, funny, clown, driving, car, fast

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Baz
Baz

Dublin, Ireland



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