For My Dearest One

Your beauty is beyond compare
I'm sorry if I start to stare
Your skin feels oh so good to me
The sight of you just brings me glee
Your smell is too good to resist
When absent, you are always missed
You cloud my brain with thoughts of you
If you weren't here I would be blue
It's cute how you squirm when you laugh
I am your sheep and you're my staff
I love you with your curves and all
And when you leave I always bawl
Fate works hard to separate us
You're always with me, that's a plus
I can't wait to see you again
Because I cannot stand this pain
And even if I have to run
You'll always be my dearest one

Reviews

[Jerryyoung1z]

I really love this write up. Artistically written and graciously flowing. Nice one.

[Dalton Wagoner]

Aww thanks haha

[Lovecraft]

Finally, one of your poems that is actually pretty good. You should really stick this kind of poetry, though it certainly needs some improvement.

Maybe try your pen at some free-verse? Perhaps make it dark it some manner.

[Dalton Wagoner]

Okay. There's a few things I've noticed here: 1) The way you just worded this review essentially sounds like you called my poems trash. 2. I don't like to write morbid and uber depressing things. 3. I have done some free verse on here, you just have to go find them.

[Lovecraft]

I have no clue where you think I implied this was "trash".

[Dalton Wagoner]

You didn't imply this poem as trash, I saw that you didn't. But the verbiage of your statement made it sound like my other poems you read we just absolutely terrible.

[Dalton Wagoner]

But I am still very appreciative of your approval.

[Lovecraft]

I'm just not a fan of Limericks and its related forms of poetry. :)

[Dalton Wagoner]

Okay, okay, I understand now. I'm sorry if I seemed a bit snappy. Honestly, I have only been posting them lately. Most of my poems aren't Limericks.

[Lovecraft]

Good enough. ;)

[Dalton Wagoner]

Haha you haven't looked at my whole profile so you wouldn't know :-P

[Lovecraft]

Well, I'm not too into the whole Christian/Conservative thing. :P

[Dalton Wagoner]

Haha there's no Conservative ones yet, but there are a few Christian ones