REINCARNATED

REINCARNATED

A Poem by Bear

Balanced on the edge of the Grim Reapers blade
As before my eyes, my whole life is replayed
That my good and bad deeds can be weighed
So judgment on my soul can fairly be made
Then plunged into Mother earth's pool of souls
Where memories are quenched like glowing coals
Purified and rendered back to an infants control
Then expelled from the astral plane is my soul
Reborn among the living given a second chance
Reincarnated to improve upon my self perchance
Growing and learning through life again I dance
Past pitfalls that previously tripped up my advance
A slow learner for dozens of lives I lived in a trance
A young child with an old soul I slowly advance
Bear


© 2017 Bear



Author's Note

Bear
I leave most punctuation to the reader that they can read the poem in their own meter, mood and motility. I thank you for taking the time to read my work.

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Form of poem is for me hard to read it. Letters are too big also if you make stanza it will be make more enjoyable.poem is too long for this.but I like your images in the words how you connected meaning and symbols. Also this new hope if you will be reborn all will be better.

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Bear

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for taking the time to leave a review I shall gladly return the read and review favor soon

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Complications in my life has left me with little or no time for read request for now. With luck things will work out in a few days, bad luck it will take longer, thank you for understanding. WHO AM.. more..

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A Poem by Bear





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