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A Poem by Beau-dee-loot

The unspeakable

The keep to yourself

The never to been spoken

The unindulged

The need most to but for that reason not mentioned

The so precious it's kept

The so painful it could only, once emitted, be undermined

The secrets we hold we don't want to

The words screaming inside


© 2012 Beau-dee-loot



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The so precious it's kept secret. It is so secret you don't even tell yourself

Posted 9 Months Ago


This is a very beautiful and unique piece, great write!!!!

Posted 9 Months Ago


enjoyed that it is well written and very dark in the same breath

Posted 9 Months Ago


a true quote(s)

Posted 9 Months Ago


*never to be spoken

Your words scream out like statements of true power and confidence. I love it this piece speaks volumes, i can imagine it like a ending phrase in a speech.

Posted 9 Months Ago


very insightful.

Posted 9 Months Ago


a most uncomfortable feeling perfectly captured.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Very interesting indeed, i enjoyed this clever and well written and has a strong meaning behind it. :) it says a lot. Great Poem. Hope to read more of your work as soon a i can.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Very interesting piece. I really like the theme, and the word choices and phrasing are intriguing. The flow doesn't work for me, it seems awkward in places - but that might be the point. :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


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the title was clever, it was that i was intrigue and i was not wrong. the poem is short but speaks a lot of pain and loneliness. i enjoyed it.

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Added on July 20, 2012
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Beau-dee-loot

Manchester, North West, United Kingdom



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