Fear

Fear

A Poem by BeautifulHoliday
"

Anxiety at its finest

"
Buzz
Light
Words
        "Done"
Signals
Understanding
Confusion
        "Why"
Silence
Waiting
Panicking
        Nothing
Walking
Listening
Thinking
        Nothing...
Sitting
Writing
Buzzing
        "Hi."

I have to wait
to hear what I
did wrong again.

Body shaking
Head spinning
Eyes watering
Hands fisting

Screaming
Fighting
Falling
Losing

Destroyed.
Buzz
        "But I love you."

© 2016 BeautifulHoliday


Author's Note

BeautifulHoliday
I know it has potential but I'm not sure where to take it.

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there are several places to take it really, the obvious being to leave it alone and let it stand on it's own merit as a simple and effective piece, where I would suggest is to fill the lines with descriptive imagery on the bodies that ensnare those feelings and emotion! Just a thought! Well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2016
Last Updated on August 11, 2016
Tags: anxiety, fear, stress

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BeautifulHoliday
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Most of my writings are about dark times, strong feelings, or things that I love. Any feedback is always welcome. Thank you for reading my work and I hope something resonated with you! more..

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