Supersonic

Supersonic

A Poem by BeautifulHoliday
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Always wanting to upgrade

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Upgrade
Version 2.0
We are programmed
to search for upgrades.
But with our humanity
we cannot find
another version
of human.
Our senses
are not the worst
or best,
but are balanced for us.
How
could we handle
another upgrade?
Silence.
What we all need
to keep us sane
does not exist
in this world.
Hearing
beyond what we are meant to.
The beating of hearts.
The dancing of air.
The sounds of nature.
The words we mouth,
but do not dare speak.
And perhaps in time
an increased sense
of our world
will be out of balance.
In a world of
controlled chaos
and a desire to know
Do we need
to know
everything?

© 2016 BeautifulHoliday


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This was wonderfully thought-out and executed. The meaning behind this is as clear as anything: We don't need to know everything. The anxiety that comes from us constantly searching; that feeling of always digging for something, long before we've even settled in to enjoying what is immediately around us. This piece highlights those things without flaw.

A wonderful writing, from me to you (or vice versa, perhaps!)
Great work. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2016
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Tags: humanity, technology

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