Dark Lucid Dream

I had nothing else to write about. A really dark interpretation of Armagaddeon?

Lying inside myself for hours

Sleeping under the moonlit sky

Revolving around the Earth

As the midnight hours pass me by

 

An invisible misty vision,

Where the shadows loom

Wondering in the dark woods

She preaches to the world's impending doom

 

Bloody tears, bleed from her eyes

Kissing her weeping tears,

Promising to shed no light

Only truth in your worst nightmares

 

Demons enter from the bowels of hell

Darkness becomes all we know

Red rivers flow, flooding thy Earth

The Devil's deathening blow

 

I witness the world's end

In the very corners of my mind

Wondering when humanity will change ways

Or look forward to the end of mankind.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Gee, BT - could you be anymore morbid...

Reviews

[The Outlaws' Song]

You are absolutely amazing...with every poem you reveal a new dimension of your talent and vision, you add a new color to your pallet!!! This poem is very very well written, and i'm not talking here about flow or any other detail that has to do with the structure of the poem - which, by the way, is great!! I'm talking about the message and about the dark, obscure imagery!!! The message is very very deep and that's something that i always love about your poetry - you come up with deep and meaningful messages/subjects.

You are very gifted!!!

"I witness the world's end

In the very corners of my mind

Wondering when humanity will change ways

Or look forward to the end of mankind."

[Kitty]

I like the morbid touch to this. It is dark and emotional. I like your closing stanza:

"I witness the world's end
In the very corners of my mind
Wondering when humanity will change ways
Or look forward to the end of mankind."

A really fantastically written poem. Well done!!!

Josie

[THERISA]

Writing is reflective of the moods at the time, which we pick up a pen/pencil or start typing on a keyboard. Giving release to the inner daemons which plague our souls. This poem is reflective of some of the darkness that haunts you. Honestly, i know that you have written dark poems here than this one, which have let me scared for you. Thank you for sharing this dark poem with us.

Therisa

[JC Fox]

I'm sure you can, you and I both know that you can! ^_^ Good job and this is a deep, morbid poem, but her you know what, at least it's a artsy take on the whole end of the world thing.

[Ralphy]

I suppose I don't like doom but it's a reality that we as a whole must face. It really is vivid and of course you add the light. Nice work

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

That'll scare the pants off of humanity for sure, dark write. good job.

[Jane Doe]

So well written. Very dark imagery, and such a powerful message. Thanks for sharing!