CLOUDS

CLOUDS

A Poem by Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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My head really is in the clouds lately....

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Pillowy visions of any imagination. Carelessly metamorphing into any shape or size among the azure atmosphere, seperating Earth from the rest of the universe. Peaceful yet secretly holding within its raging fury that could change almost without warning. I gaze in amazement, studying their every move. Freedom...A simple elogance, I yearn to share in their moments of weightlessness. It takes my breath away.

© 2011 Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen


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Staring at the clouds can be magical, right? I really liked this, it captures the simplicity of the act and also the deep, ethereal feeling it produces.

Posted 12 Years Ago


liking this phrase"Freedom...A simple elogance, I yearn to share in their moments of weightlessness. It takes my breath away.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple and direct, a crafted regent of peace and desire, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, nice! This was really relaxing. I could picture myself down in a field out in the middle of nowhere laying down, and just gazing towards the heavens, and taking it all in. A very beautiful write :)

M.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are endowed with great imagination

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2011
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Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen

Passionate kisses of a mind gone wild, NJ



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My name is Rayne and I have been writing since high school. I took a long vacation from writing, and slowly starting to come back into it again. I admit that I am not the greatest writer, I'm just doi.. more..

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