Backstabbing For Fame

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Heartfelt remembrance
Play on words
Hopelessly clinging
To the wrong girl
Call me names
Crush me if you’d like
Nothing will hurt me
It’s all in spite
~*~
Jaded confusion
I could care less
Call me a back stabber
But whose knife was it
Best friend is a word
Not w***e as a friend
Easily replaced
When remembering sin
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Judgment remarks
Long over due
Speak as you may
Nobody is listening to you
You messed up once
It won’t happen again
You expected the fall
Then why not let it end
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Nobody judged you
You jump so easily
Timeless expressions
Begging on your knees
What can you say to make it right
How do you live with yourself
Face your fight
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Friendship is nothing
If they never cared
Holding on to something
That never was there
Play your mind games
You don’t hold my strings
Life was better
Before you appeared to me
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Photo’s in albums
I should replace
Instead I’ll light them
Send them in flame
Knife in my back
Easy to see
Nothing is important
Your not on your knees
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Evil nightmares
Not my burden to bare
Nobody did this
You drove us there
Stabbing pain
Won’t go away
Wishing for nothing
But for you to go away.
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Friend to your face
Hate to your spine
Turn you around
Web of lies
Change is nothing
You can’t change a b***h
All you can do
Is falsely cover it.
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Trust me alone
I’m not the one to blame
He did this to us
I was there
I played the game
How can we trust
The one who we can’t stand
Hiding alone
Behind a pillar of sand.
~*~
Heartfelt remembrance
Play on words
Hopelessly clinging
To the wrong girl
Call me names
Crush me if you’d like
Nothing will hurt me
It’s all in spite

Author's Note

I can't stand for somebody to be friends with you and then turn around and stick there knife into your back. It is bad when you have a best friend who stabs you but it is even worse when she tries to take everything you have, Then try to play victim. I cannot stand for somebody to play victim.

With that said, I was playing nice, I was trying to forgive but with current poems being posted and people making me out to be something that I am not so that nobody would read my writing is immature. This are high school games that I will not play. When she can be woman enough to take blame for what she did instead of turning everything around so she can play the poor me card I will unblock her. Until then, It is best that people just grow up, get a life and stay out of mine.

Reviews

[CharlesMonroe]

I know exactlly how you feel :/ and Ali donht let anybody get to you. Especially this girl who's only jealous of you. Your an amazing writer, so what if a few people wanna give you s**t. Just let them, cause they're just bored with life. And when they realize you don't give a f**k about them then they'll move on. Stay strong, and I'm always here if you need to talk (:

[roy mccarthy]

what's up with you guys ?
it's like 8 mile with the rap battles!

[Sweet Emotions]

This is very good. I think you should add more punctuation, especially in lines that are questions. A question without a question mark is irritating and interrupts the flow of reading. As far as the words, I wouldn't change anything.

[Kayla K]

Stay strong Ali. I'll be there for you. Try to talk it through, if you think you can.

[Revolutionary]

Cool poem,and a clever way to tell someone to f**k off.It is about writing and shareing here.I am sorry you are dealing with drama.I hear there is alot of that,but this is not a real place.Have fun and make new review friends.Love your tell em off poem.Who needs friends when you have backstabbing b*****s.