My Reality

Shoot me down
Murder me willingly
Take everything
I have left inside of me
Take the hurt
The pain
The pride
Take everything
So I can no longer hide.
Take my pills
There just an escape
My reality
Is what the take away
Message the press
Tell them I caved
I can't handle anything
I feel it slipping away
-
Play a game
So I can hide
I don't want to be here
Leave me to take my life
A razor has etched
It's stories in my skin
Leave me alone
I can't let you in
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Laughter is gold
If only for awhile
Then you'll take that gold
Smash it with a smile
Drown me in tears
You play the game well
I hope to God
You rot in hell
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Run me to tears
It comes so well
So easy for you
To throw me into this well
I gave you everything
You took that from me
Now what is left
Not even a glimmer to see
your killing me slowly
Though you'd never tell
Your actions speak louder
Than your words ever will.

Reviews

[out]

wow....been there and this brings some pain but writing is a great way to deal with the crap of life and the people we choose(and sometimes didn't choose) to be in it. excellent piece!

[Spook_13]

I am concerned, but I will keep back. the poem is very raw

[Whitebonepalace]

Ali ): I'm so sorry. If you evee wanna talk, or just vent, than message me..okay?

[joshua deathdealer]

Wow I think is really good. I love the content here. 'Murder me willingly'!!

[RedInk524]

Interesting. Again with the flare. I hope that whatever it is passes soon, but then again i do like the heat in your recent poems.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

care love ....such words make birds flock together just to fly apart in a beautiful decay write until your heart finds its more then okay write until your heart relieves your mind of its duties peace love and harmony

[Lily Mae]

The last two lines sum it up beautifully...xx

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

WOW! this poem is awesome!

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

often actions speak louder and sometimes silence is heard around the world........well penned, emotion packed piece ((hugs))

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

No need to ask, you words are loud and clear. This poem speaks of such a great loss the loss of your inner self. I know it well, but it is grand when you find her again. Never give up and ALWAYS beieve in tomorrow. xo