Blood Stained Whispers

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On blood stained whispers
You buy you time
Hoping to kill
It only takes time
Soft nothings
You filled my ear
Ripped out my heart
Left me in tears

On sun lit waters
Did we ride
Only to find
The lesson of time
If only I knew
What you knew back then
I would have ran
Never let you in

Beautiful friendship
Could have been more
Why would I try
Just to be called a w***e
I gave up my longing
As you gave up me
Now all that is left
Are filthy pieces of me

Innocent lust
Is what it's been called
Yet it was so much more
Until you let me fall
Fed me your lies
Straight to my face
Now I am left
My steps to retrace

Author's Note

With what a deep devotedness of woe
I wept thy absence - o'er and o'er again
Thinking of thee, still thee, till thought grew pain,
And memory, like a drop that, night and day,
Falls cold and ceaseless, wore my heart away!
~Thomas Moore

Reviews

[Spookers]

This is sad, but it is beautiful. I like the picture you chose, as well. Good job

[dreaming dame]

Truly a tale of woe. But so beautiful. :)

[Aristede Craig Jr]

beauty the path you finnally step back on your path take it because being lost is not completely horrible, being found can make you fill exposed, so sometimetimes if you journey alone it is better for your goal, your path looking like the yellow brick road, but you create it so you can build bridges to get over the rain before the waterfalls, river, stand strong and love its beautiful when you see it though yourself purely true , yourself drunk with love..... Edet Sira tis love is all

[Sam]

Amazing.

[i-love-you-boo♥]

Really good your an awesome writer :)

[RedInk524]

The closer you allow someone to be, the deeper they can stab. Seldom can an honorable and respectable person be found.

[WynterPhoenix]

This is very different from your other stuff. I like it. I think this may be my favorite from you, and the image is phenomenal. We need a photo shoot with a dress and ketchup. Lol. And a couple Halloween wigs =]

[∂αʌ<..]

your style of writing is unique Ali! thats whats makes the originality of your work...but its the feelings you pour into your work that makes it genuine!

a pleasure as always! and i know still more to come!:))

[HeIsWe]

Good writing!!