When the earth rants.

Let me crash

let me crash and close your eyes

for this world's misery

isn't yours to worry about

the crying children who starve

are not your children to feed

Yes, yes, just lie wrapped in your cocoon

waiting for your end to come

boy it's coming so soon

close your eyes

close your ears

let it fall

let it crash

let the earth burn

for you only think

about your childish needs

not realizing, the world's pain

is all caused by your deeds

your fear of words

your coward soul

your rotten heart

that'll be sucked by worms

Ashes to ashes.

Dust to dust

to me you'll return

in my hall you'll fall

one day...

you will die all

and my trees shall grow again

my birds shall sing again

and from your sins

I'll forever be purified.

 

 

our earth is now silently enduring the pain we are causing her to feel, but one day this mother of ours will say ''ENOUGH"

 

Author's Note

forgive me if this one does not live up to be a complete POEM in word structure, it's a rant and i couldn't make it look any better. So let's just say that it's not a poem, it's just a thought. Enjoy

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"you will die all
and my trees shall grow again
my birds shall sing again
and from your sins
I'll forever be purified."
I hope the above statement is true. Man is doing his best to destroy all that is beautiful. I like the strong statements and question brought to life by your poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Salar Majak]

thank you for reading ^.^ the statement is scary but true, i guess, i'm glad you like it :D

[Zoya Sahai]

Its an amazing poem, or thought.. One can actually visualize the earth crying out in pain from the torment we're causing to it.

[Salar Majak]

thanks a lot, and i agree with you, the Earth has had enough!!,
i'm glad you like it

[being me]

it is not a rant dear but a reminder to us of what may happen if we don't stop right now and amend our ways..
Dust to dust
to me you'll return
in my hall you'll fall
one day...
you will die all
and my trees shall grow again
my birds shall sing again
and from your sins
I'll forever be purified.
i loved these lines..

[Salar Majak]

thanks sooooo much!!!

[Nithin Purple]

rage is what i liked here

[Em]

I like this.
Great work!

[Salar Majak]

thanks :D

[Baby Ricochet]

She could shake us off like a bad case of fleas. Great write sister.

[Salar Majak]

oh i know that believe me, sometimes i think she should XD, thanks bro

[Craig2591]

I absolutely believe this! The earth will win in the end.

[Salar Majak]

thanks

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow a powerfully written poem from you. I love this, it is brutal and honest and full of rage for the injustice and blindness of the human race. One of my favorites.

[Salar Majak]

awwwww thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[eagle style]

well done!!!!

[Salar Majak]

thank you!!!

[Nick.B]

Agree with what you said, very emotional poem...great job

[Salar Majak]

thanks alot :D