where ever the hearts may linger

just something i wrote

Tell me...
Do the angels treat you right?
do they bring you news of the world..
news of us...wasting time... being alive.
of us fooling around.... with endless hopes


Do you from above see the night?
how it spreads the darkened shade...
slowly expanding to swallow the lights,
and rest silently waiting for us to fade...


Do you see the shinning sun,
above the sky casting rays?
do you feel the gentle touches?
and the kind warmth can you embrace?


Or is your soul too dead to feel...
is your grave too dark and cold...
scared we are to face what's real
for death is a mistry that's never been told.

Author's Note

again... one of my crazy thoughts.

Reviews

[Melon Race]

Very nicely written, and quite an interesting subject. It reminds me of those satellite photos that are taken at night time and you see the illuminated cities on the map. Wonderful. My favourite part, however, was the title. It's a phrase that can easily be turned into a question, and the fact that you didn't was awesome, because the point isn't about what happens to us when we die, but obviously how we lead our own lives and cope with the loss of a loved one.

Brilliant.

[Salar Majak]

:D thanks a lot for your kind words!
i really am gratful,
and about the title, i just thought of it, i didn't even know if it was even suitable :P,
you made me sure it is,thank you for that :D

[Melon Race]

You're so very welcome.

[Frieda P]

Amazing musings going on this write, you had me with the first line.

'Do the angels treat you right?'

It just got better and better, really lovely read that makes me ponder so many of your questions here. Kudo Sal.

[Salar Majak]

thank you!!!!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, most enjoyable read Sal!

[Talkless]

Bravo!!

[Salar Majak]

thank you :)

[emmajoy]

Not crazy, but vast thoughts, words to return to time again. You have the gentle gift of phrasing poetically but in a some time unrestrained or natural style, This kicks into so many places, asks questions of each reader, nothing stated but a viewpoint to start with. To each our own interpretation or decision .. death is indeed a mystery .. just as life is ..

Thank you for sharing ..

[Salar Majak]

thanks a lot!
i do agree, Death is a mistery :)

[de_maruf]

Aspects of institutions

Although individual, formal organizations, commonly identified as "institutions," may be deliberately and intentionally created by people, the development and functioning of institutions in society in general may be regarded as an instance of emergence; that is, institutions arise, develop and function in a pattern of social self-organization, which goes beyond the conscious intentions of the individual humans involved.
As mechanisms of social interaction, institutions are manifest in both formal organizations, such as the U.S. Congress, or the Roman Catholic Church, and, also, in informal social order and organization, reflecting human psychology, culture, habits and customs, and encompassing subjective experience of meaningful enactments. Most important institutions, considered abstractly, have both objective and subjective aspects: examples include money and marriage. The institution of money encompasses many formal organizations, including banks and government treasury departments and stock exchanges, which may be termed, "institutions," as well as subjective experiences, which guide people in their pursuit of personal well-being. Powerful institutions are able to imbue a paper currency with certain value, and to induce millions into cooperative production and trade in pursuit of economic ends abstractly denominated in that currency's units.[citation needed] The subjective experience of money is so pervasive and persuasive that economists talk of the "money illusion" and try to disabuse their students of it, in preparation for learning economic analysis.[citation needed]

[TLK]

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[Salar Majak]

ok this is creapy

[Infurno-Blaze]

beautiful poem. Lovely work.

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

simple but lovely...this kind of writes speak to my heart...thanx for sharing

[Salar Majak]

thanks for reading, i'm glad it reached you :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ur welcome :)

[InsanityWriter]

Interesting thoughts. :) It flows together beautifully. ^_^

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Their blood cries out from the grave. Nicely written and very thought provoking.

[Salar Majak]

thank you!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[AWickedMoon]

Great poem. :)

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I love how you expressed those questions, the poem is smooth flowing. The thought is brilliant. Keep writing!

[Salar Majak]

thank you!!!!