Giving Up

Giving Up

A Poem by Brittany Evans

is it possible to be unstoppable?
Live life the way it should be lived.
Wake up angry at the world.
Blocking out the haters and ignoring the ones who are trying to save you.
Not wanting life to be perfect.
Giving up on life and have hopelessness take control.
Sleeping to dream what reality can't give you.
Knowing that life would never get better.
Hoping but knowing the hope is unheard.
To give love but hoping it is untouched.
To have no one control you or care for you.
Think that every spoken word is against you.
Depressed with no one to go to.
It's unstoppable.
The depression takes affect.
It's unstoppable.
Not wanting to live or breath. To leave life in silence.
To be able to accept that your life has liven its fullest.
To be remembered and to be love forever.
with a note that reads.......
Is it possible to be unstoppable?

© 2014 Brittany Evans



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I like the poem.
"To be remembered and to be love forever.
with a note that reads.......
Is it possible to be unstoppable?"
I believe we can be unstoppable. We can't give in to naysayers and liars. Good energy and wisdom in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Evans

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. I like the energy and drive of your words.



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I like the line, "Sleeping to dream what reality can't give you" powerful lines, great poem.
Is it possible to be unstoppable? Great question. I believe that we can, if we really want to make our dreams become a reality.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Evans

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I feel like everyone dreams for something.
1Disawsum

3 Years Ago

Yes, we all do, but only some will believe enough in their ability, and reach their dream and potent.. read more
What a question albeit rhetorical I imagine. I couldn't help to have a song roaming around while I read your writing it went something like "There is only one way of life" "And that one is your own " which automatically will make you unstoppable and will pretty much answer each and very of the questions that are finely woven in your writing.

Thankyou

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Evans

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
I like the poem.
"To be remembered and to be love forever.
with a note that reads.......
Is it possible to be unstoppable?"
I believe we can be unstoppable. We can't give in to naysayers and liars. Good energy and wisdom in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Evans

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. I like the energy and drive of your words.

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