Unappreciated

Im so tired
of feeling trapped.
Giving my love
but having it untouched.
Knowing that I gave my all
even though it wasnt enough.
Loosing hope of my hope appearing again.
Not knowing who is really there for me
or who is just sticking around to see me fail.
I can't stand the pain.
I have made my mistakes
and cannot run them away.
My biggest fear is not being able to awake.
To be trapped forever
to have my dreams become my reality.
To not be able to tell the ones I love how much pain im in.
Giving up feels like loosing yourself
and the world around you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is hard and take hard work. I told my daughters. Slow and easy does it. Know what you are getting before giving your love away.
"I can't stand the pain.
I have made my mistakes
and cannot run them away. "
I lost more times than I can remember. Lessons of love are hard and if we are wise. Take your time. Do dates and meet the parent. Parents will tell you everything. A powerful poem for thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[RubyOmma]

I really like the beginning. The first two lines are my favorite.

[A. Amos]

to have my dreams become my reality.
To not be able to tell the ones I love how much pain im in.
Giving up feels like loosing yourself
and the world around you.

The whole read was amazing, however above lines were mesmerizing!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is really nice. I think this is one of those things that everyone can relate to and thats really nice that you could put it into word that speak so loudly. Well done . Keep posting good stuff.

[Zakari Schmidt]

Love doesn't make us real but it can define us. You defined that very well. There's a difference between love and lust.. but what about faith. What separates faith from love? Left me w those questions, was a very good read

[Sunya]

Its a nice poem :) you shouldn't give up writing though cuz you are pretty good and natural at it :)
'My biggest fear is not being able to wake*' would be better i suppose
nice write :)
-Sunya

[MomzillaNC]

You put words to what we all feel while striving on that journey to love. But, it's a journey worth taking when you finally find true and lasting love. When you do find love, it will be hard work to hold on to it. Love must keep growing to stay alive, and it takes both people to keep it growing. But, oh! The unfathomable comfort and rest you'll find. Love isn't romance. Love isn't sex. Love is someone who gets up for work at 5am, and leaves iced coffee in the fridge for you. Love is mundane. Love is someone who knows how you like the toothpaste on your toothbrush. Love is someone who sees you out of your bra, after years of nursing, and still wants you. Love is someone you can fart in front of and tease about his own farting and he'll laugh as hard as you do. Love is someone who'll kiss you in the morning BEFORE you've brushed your teeth.