Journey

Journey

A Poem by Behind blue eyes
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written by my 8 year old for her teacher

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You’ve helped me with my journey

You've helped me with me work

You've made my mind grow stronger

You've helped me know my worth

Therefore I’ll always be a star

A friend of yours I’ll be

As secrets in my little mind

You’ll always stay with me



© 2017 Behind blue eyes



Author's Note

Behind blue eyes
very little help given by me, other than a little help rephrasing the end and likes 4 and 6 but all her own words and her own work. any pointers to help her improve would be great

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Great work
Congrats to her

Posted 4 Months Ago


For a moment I had thought this was by your hand....but this was by an 8 year old's!? Well.....all I can say is I wasn't writing quite as deep and fancy stuff as this when I was 8....Wondrous in every poetic way! Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Behind blue eyes

4 Months Ago

thank you, she just absolutely loves reading and writing! We had a little play together after she wr.. read more
emipoemi

4 Months Ago

I can always offer my mentoring services. Talent like that should not be wasted. Keep playing. Writi.. read more

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Added on July 20, 2017
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Behind blue eyes
Behind blue eyes

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It's been a long time since I have written, and even longer since I dared to put anything I have written out there for other people to read. A lot of my writing is my way of working through my thought.. more..

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