Excerpt from prologue 'War is Hell' by my teenage son

Excerpt from prologue 'War is Hell' by my teenage son

A Story by O'Musings
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Excerpt from a prologue from my 15 year old dyslexic sons first attempt at fiction/fantasy

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Amber eyes glared down upon a name tag embroidered with his name L.koleshc. Amber eyes stuck quivering, quavering with the horrors of this world, dark bags hanging underneath them. Breaths heavy, slowly drawn. Complexion slightly tanned with a few freckles scattered around, more centred around his forehead. Others just like him, sitting, waiting out the current hail of fire. Joy a fleeting memory of the world he is here protecting.

Cold arctic blue eyes, filled with emptiness

© 2017 O'Musings



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Brilliant writing! What a great job your young son had done here. Great imagery, emotion, depth. Eloquent and dramatic language. Keep writing young man, you have amazing talent!




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O'Musings

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment upon my son's work. I'm very grateful for .. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

1 Month Ago

You are very welcome! He has great talent above and despite his challenges. Love seeing budding writ.. read more
O'Musings

1 Month Ago

Thank you , many great authors & writers are dyslexic. Even Agatha Christie was dyslexic. Pretty ama.. read more

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Added on September 17, 2017
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Tags: Fiction, fantasy, war, battle, soldiers

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