Our Special Spot

Our Special Spot

A Poem by Mayue Naoya
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This is about a guy who did a girl wrong, and how she watched him move on to another girl and treat her the same way. She then gets deja vu, because the girl is in the same position she was in.

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Today i saw you with another chick
I see your still up to your stupid tricks
I try to hide my pain inside
Everything you said was a lie


I wonder if you took her to our special spot
Do you take her when its cold or hot?
You hardly remember me it make me mad
Maybe things aren't that bad


I'm still trying to move on
Things feel weird now that your gone
I was a fool to let you break my heart
Things are different now that were apart


I wonder if you took her to our special spot
Do you take her when its cold or hot?
You hardly remember me it makes me mad
Maybe things aren't that bad 


I would cry if i still had tears
Why do I bother you still wont care
I see you treating her bad, its like deja vu 
I bet she's tired of chasing you


I wonder if you took her to our special spot
Do you take her when its cold or hot?
You hardly remember me i'm so glad
Maybe things aren't that bad.



© 2018 Mayue Naoya


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love this dejavu poem
love anything dejavu even used it as a chat name several years ago very sad poem but has reality in it, sounds like a true soulful love story
thanks for entering into my romantic competition, still reading all the entries, takes time


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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hello again, thanks for entry into my other competition, what i said before still holds true, thanks again

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this dejavu poem
love anything dejavu even used it as a chat name several years ago very sad poem but has reality in it, sounds like a true soulful love story
thanks for entering into my romantic competition, still reading all the entries, takes time


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 10, 2018
Last Updated on May 10, 2018
Tags: Heartbroken, Love, Deja vu

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Mayue Naoya
Mayue Naoya

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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