Every Time

Every Time

A Poem by Bell-lala
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As I sat there with tears in my eyes,
You came over to me and took my hand.
You made me realize
how to withstand.

With kisses so pure
And care that's ever so warm,
you are my only cure
that can always fix my silver storm

You give me a purpose to my name
Your hugs are so safe and inviting.
Without you I just wouldn't be the same.
I can't describe the love I have for you in writing. 

I'll never forget everything you done for me.
You smiled and told me you understood.
You've taught me how true love should be,
You've done all the things you said you would.

When I see you every time,
it always feels like the first time I met you.
You look to me with eyes so blue and fine
And you say, "I love you. I really do"

I just have to thank you for everything.
You've been my biggest supporter.
A month later, and I still feel like I'm dreaming.
You keep my heart in order.



© 2012 Bell-lala



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This is a beautifully written poem - it brings to mind roses and lace and heart-shaped chocolates, yet still doesn't cross the line from pleasantly sweet to overly saccharine. Great work and good for you that you have so much love in your life :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bell-lala

4 Years Ago

Thank you!! ^_^
This is so beauiful

Posted 4 Years Ago


Makes one think of what to do.
I do like the honesty of the piece.
So nicely written & from the heart.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bell-lala

4 Years Ago

Aww thank you ^_^
The first mistake
A band of soldiers finds diplomacy in the dreg forest comes with consequences.
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May the love remain in your life forever.....:)
About the poem: straight from the heart

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bell-lala

4 Years Ago

thank you :) it will
This was beautifully written! I felt the love and romance pouring in throughout this whole poem. You wrote it so well. Thank you for sharing!

~Erinne

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Bell-lala

4 Years Ago

thank you :)
Erinne S.

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
I really love this guy. If I could, I would move mountains for him :) Well, I hope you guys enjoy the write ^-^ tell me what ya think :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bell-lala
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