Love Story

A love story for many women out there.

When your hand curls around mine

And your eyes gaze into mine

And your lips find mine

I'm in heaven

 

When your love begins to take over me

And your affection eats at me

And you love me

I'm in heaven

 

When I am allowed to feel your affection

And I breathe in your affection

And I live your affection

I'm in heaven

 

When you leave me and kill my love

And you destroy my lasting love

And you throw away love

I'm in Hell

Author's Note

Hope it's not too raunchy.

Reviews

[mischeif]

Bella's got a boyfriend bella's got a boyfriend.

This really paints a picture in your head (of you and brenton)
Very emotional great work

[Lizanne]

A beautiful piece that speaks of all the emotions love embraces. Well written. Wisely stated of how high we soar to reach the threshold of heaven when in love and the shattering depths we can fall to when love fails us. The flow is smooth. Your poetic pen served you well on this writing. Look forward to reading more of your works.