What Did I Do To You?

A short poem. Enjoy!

What did i do to you?

What did I do to deserve this punishment?

Did I do something wrong,

to make you hate me so much?

I just don't understand what went wrong.

It's so different now, though.

I don't really want to give you a second chance after seeing what you wanted to do to me.

But what did I do to you,

to make me deserve this?

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, please. Enjoy!

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

Writing is very cathatic, and I like the way you have expressed your strenght! You did nothing...it takes two. Take Care ~ Jude :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The truth is you probably did nothing, the person treating you bad is miserable and want to make you miserable too. I great vent.

[Akina]

great poem, it relly shows your feelings, and thats great.
thanks for sharing.

[Babbette Francis]

I'm sorry you have to face this alone. If you do have to go, I pray that they make you feel at home and that it turns out better than you'd ever dreamed possible.

[Anna]

You've got the essential to poetry. Emotion.

Try reading from other classic authors with various styles of poetry.
Try including imagery and symbolism.

I excited for you to improve.

[Jordan]

its a really good poem, shows emotion and speaks ur mindddddd,,,,, but i dont want you to leave :'(

[Lola]

AWESOME the BEST