I'll Always Remember

I'll Always Remember

A Poem by Closed Account
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A short poem about the guy i like, and i'll always remember, no matter what. Enjoy! =D

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I'll always remember the first time I talked to you,

and we talked for so long.

That seems like a million years ago,

but it was really only a few months ago.

And I'll always remember the first time I stayed up,

because I couldn't sleep.

It was because I was thinking of you the whole night.

I'll always remember the first time i realized,

that i had a major crush on you.

I just couldn't get you out of my head that whole weekend,

and even now,

about 2 months later,

i still can't get you out of my head.

I'll always remember you,

because no matter what you say,

you are totally unforgettable.

No matter how hard I'd try,

I'll never be able to forget you,

the most amazing guy.

© 2009 Closed Account


Author's Note

Closed Account
this is an.........interesting poem. Please tell me what you think. thanks!
=D

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Simply awesomely awesome! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I definitely agree with the other comments - You have captured that feeling of meeting someone and being smitten with their existence.. .Well done, thank you for making me smile!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww this is so cute. It definitely summarizes the feelings and thoughts a girl has when she has a crush on a guy. I could really relate to your poem. Good Job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow.. so nice.. the writing displayed of an initial meeting of someone you are attracted to .. wanting to know more about them.. and them about you.. captivating feeling found in this that is sooo true when you first start falling for that crush.. love it!!! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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