Before You

Inspired by "The Only Exception" by Paramore

I never believed in love.

Love at first sight was for movies.

Knights in shining armor were for princess stories.

Frogs turning into handsome princes were for fairytales.

And no matter how much I tried to change what I thought,

Everything proved that real love didn’t exist.

Guys broke my heart, one after the other.

Things in my life just fell apart.

But then I found you.

You were different.

You proved to me that love was real,

And that you just had to fight for it.

No matter what obstacles were in they way,

Love could always overcome difficulties.

Before you, I was blind.

To love.

To hope.

To everything.

But now that I found you, I’m starting to believe.

 

Author's Note

Ehh, I don't really like this. Any advice on how to make this better/change this/etc.? Please review and tell me what you think!!! Thanks for reading <3

Reviews

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what a lovely uplifting poem, full and brimming with hope and love great piece

[master squiggles]

Aw, so beautiful. How can you not like it? I like it haha. Prettyness. I don't think that you need to change anything.

[Ian Faraway]

This reminds me of a song, good write....but fictional

[Caitlynxoxo]

personally, i really don't think there needs any changing whatsoever in it. This was a beautiful poem which expressed what us girls go through on a day-t-day basis, believing that there's a prince charming out there, and that we just need to overcome the fakes before finding mr.right. :) suffice to say, i really did like this. It explains my life perfectly, really lol. Good job!

[Bella-Marie]

Very pretty. I had the song you said it was based on while I read this. It worked nicely. Well done. Nice font, but as Taylor H said, bad size

[Jane Doe]

OMG !!!!! I ADORE IT BELLAZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

hm, very nice beautiful

[Taylor H.]

I thought it was perfect the way it is. maybe try writing it with smaller lines...?

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!