Let there be war

Let there be war

A Story by JaneDoe

Thomas: how could you!?!


Matthew: * continues walking*


Thomas: IM STILL IN LOVE WITH HER 


Matthew: * stops*  whispers " you had 6 years...

*turns around * you had six years to show her you love her too! She's been in love with you that whole time! You wasted that time being with girls that don't matter, saying that you're not ready for a real relationship!! That when your ready to settle you'll come to her but do you know how much those words hurt ?! knowing that she would have had you when you've been with everything and everyone...what would that make her? A goddamn fool


Thomas:....you don't get it 


Matthew: I do... I fell in love with the kind of person she is..do you even know how kind or generous or how big of a heart she even has?

She wakes up with me every day 4 am to see me off, to wish me a good day at work and hug me goodbye and tell me that she loves me ...because she knows that by the time I get back itll be too late to say any of that, she makes sure that I get to work safely texting me when I leave the house then every half hour until I reach the office..she makes me feel like I'm the only man she's ever loved in her life... her  heart is so big and shed never want anyone to be hurt the way she's been hurt. I fell in love with her smile and those hazel eyes. You had 6 years... I had 2 and I'm already married because I knew from the minute I met her that this was real. It was something worth fighting for. She gets jealous and a little anxious but little does she know that she's the only woman I've ever loved. I was ready for something real, I knew it would be scary but if it was with her I didn't mind. 


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Here's a thought: Why stop there? Why begin in medias res and then leave everything else for interpretation. This is a great pitch. It may be a bit cliché, but nothing is cliché if taken up and molded into one's own work. Turn this into a short story of the calibre that it deserves.....or even a novel.....or a screenplay for that matter...you seem to already have the sketchings of the movie right there. Nicely done!

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JaneDoe

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Thanks for the visit ! fun fact this actually happened to a friend of mine and so when he was re tel.. read more
emipoemi

3 Weeks Ago

turn it into something!! DO! Things inspired on life makes it all the more powerful and relatable.



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Wow thats really good and I kinda got swept up by it. It is very telling and you seem to be a great writer! I look forward to reading more of your works!!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Here's a thought: Why stop there? Why begin in medias res and then leave everything else for interpretation. This is a great pitch. It may be a bit cliché, but nothing is cliché if taken up and molded into one's own work. Turn this into a short story of the calibre that it deserves.....or even a novel.....or a screenplay for that matter...you seem to already have the sketchings of the movie right there. Nicely done!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JaneDoe

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the visit ! fun fact this actually happened to a friend of mine and so when he was re tel.. read more
emipoemi

3 Weeks Ago

turn it into something!! DO! Things inspired on life makes it all the more powerful and relatable.

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