White Noise

White Noise

A Poem by BenKeane
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One of my very first attempts at poetry.

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White Noise


How very very

strange that

that’s what he

hears. The click

or the splutter

of the wheel in

the gutter, the

lock tumbler

turning the

washer churning.

But love falls on

deaf ears,

deaf eyes and a

deaf mind.

© 2014 BenKeane


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I loved it; if you didn't say it was your first poem, no way would I have quessed. Would still be continueing to find new meaning in the metaphors. I would say, please continue writing. You have a talents for poetry. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the simplicity. It flows like a mechanism. Cool and clean. Nice piece Ben.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can't really put what I want to say about this poem in words, it just makes me feel a overwhelming calm. I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BenKeane

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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BenKeane
BenKeane

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